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Clentin

Jul 03, 2024 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

This poem is part of the challenge:

07/24 Mistress in the Closet

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Lady Love Vodka

I Put her in my closet where none would see
My mistress that takes away my pains to be

There she resides every single day and night
To relieve my daily pains and fright

No one can see her or know she is there
I am the only one who cannot share

An ounce at a time lessens my pain
But permits me to hide my shame

A mistress indeed is the one I fear
Knowing she is forever near

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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11 months 4 weeks ago

Thank you for reading and

Thank you for reading and comments. I decided to take “Mistress” out of the expected meaning

11 months 4 weeks ago

Thank you, I did make a few

Thank you, I did make a few changes, hope it is better

11 months 3 weeks ago

Lady Love Vodka

Hello, Clentin,
A unique take on the contest! I agree with Alex - you may want to tighten the meter so this flows a bit smoother. Indeed, she is a mistress!
Thank you!
L

11 months 3 weeks ago

Thank you for reading and

Thank you for reading and comments. I tried to make some changes