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Last Night

Every time
I feel it's last night

they help me with
sea dishes
full of delight

my system packs up
ere its sunlight

I ask myself
where has it gone

what
Last Night

take delight me is still
A
L
I
V
E

for another
LAST
NIGHT

no rage
no fright
it may again
not be my last
what
damn
night

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Edna Sweetlove

Edna Sweetlove

5 years 7 months ago

Confusing

Were you on something when you wrote this?