Last Night

I don't consider myself a good critic. I'm not sure how to interpret this work. There is a good deal of sensuality. I don't have much to add. It captured my interest and tend to think of it as a one night stand or a metaphor for something short, vivid, remembered and perhaps best forgotten.

sounds as if somebody took their love life in their own hands lol. Or I could be reading wrong.........stan

i'm not sure i'm interpreting this correctly, but
as stan so delicately put it, i too, read it as
someone who "took their own love life into their hands"

with that thought in mind, i have to say, i quite like
the way in which you expressed it (no pun intended)

it is a work that made me ponder and re-read a few times
and i like it when that happens

cheers
p

not bed, but your collection of poems, my interpretation of 'Last Night' plays a funny game with me. Though short with ten lines, it draws me back again and again. even when I didn't get the place of the 'bone', this is a good write, I told myself as I came to conclusion. Well done.

tr