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Mar 18, 2018
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LAST PARTY
Sing no dirges when I'm gone
loss isn't how I've lived my life
so do anything but grieve
for passing won't result in strife.
Think of me, if you're inclined,
and picture me when in my prime
long before the years began to bind
and built up on me like rusty rime.
Or next time you are in a wood
close your eyes and listen close
to how the forest doesn't brood.
I'll be near where some small stream flows.
So when I'm gone throw a party
and share the many things I'd done.
Let it be the last sharing of Me
just as my next phase has begun.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Halcyon
7 years 3 months ago
A gold coin...
Your poem captured my interest from beginning to end and I couldn't agree more with your message. The word "dirges" is worth a gold coin amongst the rest of the vocabulary used. Nice writing.
scribbler
7 years 3 months ago
Hi
I am pleased you came by and even more pleased you enjoyed this scribble.......stan