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Jan 12, 2018
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Well sad
this happens to be
your last post
here
no money I believe
yet what is money
but the sweat of the brow
it comes and just goes
simply wipe it out
I compose for the love of humanity
so many still come to my gate
as I have shed my vanity
we all must entertain the masses I feel
if we have the torch and seal of lover’s beauty
compose free lance free style poetry
then see like a butter fly one day
you also will fly
and
burn in the flame of joy
but be bold do life enjoy
don't hurt even unknowingly
some one
just to ease
your own wild imagination
even unknowingly
love one love all
let this last post
be not for you alone
but for all
yet ‘tis not my last call
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
scribbler
7 years 6 months ago
Hi loved
I reckon you are far from being ready to make your last post. But that time will come to all here. BTW I think butterfly is one word. How's that for nitpicking? lol
lovedly
7 years 6 months ago
Stan I thought I am///was out fom nursey class
let the typo remain
let me see how many really do read
thanks to ye
as you know only butterfly flies
butter is flown/thrown
at passers by
scribbler
7 years 6 months ago
alas
there are butterflies, fruit flies, blue bottle flies, blow flies...all kinds of flie but the only kind we can't swat and cause to stop is time flies lol
lovedly
7 years 6 months ago
wonderflyingly said
time flies
but we can't swat it
yes but
we can bottle it up in our memories
and
urrrrrr stan rrrrrr adept
at it westernly
by the way
what r BLOW FLIES
some thng I perhaps don't know
blow
if it does still flow
hahahaaa lol
lovedly
7 years 6 months ago
blow with the winds
We go with the wind
as it blows
far into the wilderness
everyone knows
the wind continues to onwards go
lest it be a whirl wind
then up you go
heavenwards
all know back into the ocean
rest depends on the sun’s desire
and
earthly creation
the winds only blow...
just follow you also know