LEAVE NO POEM UNREAD

She came for a moment
a fleeting one
just to give me energy

Divine
she was drunk by my eyes
and like wine dissolved
into the universe
in a momentous moment

gave me the fruits of joy
men need most
of an intent
to creativity
a beautiful content
then in the eyes of god
she merged after that
monumentous moment...

devoid of all love and emotion
she did vanish
why did she have to come
a truthful heart
a soul banish

heaven alone knows
why so!
lovely poet she was

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Triskelion

2 years 10 months ago

Reaallly nice

..lovedly. I think others will understand now why your writing is so inspirational. Your second stanza is pure poetry. The ending left me wondering.
One of your best!

Thomas

lovedly

2 years 10 months ago

THANKS TO YOU AND GEE

YOU ARE SO NICE
at least you raise my morale
and
so make me feel
time as well spent

Geezer

2 years 10 months ago

Excellent...

best I've seen from you in a while. Nothing I could find to criticize. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

2 years 10 months ago

hi Gee

did u read me thanks brilliance of 2013.....all for neopoetreeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Jackweb

2 years 10 months ago

The muse in you!

You're indeed married to your muse. This is amazing creation. The beautiful rhythmic sweetness of the words brings an aesthetic to the reader's perspective in the poetic description of your mind.

Nice job!
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