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Apr 22, 2025
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Let the Child Dream
Let the child dream,
Thinking of stars blossoming in paradise,
Imagining crafts, creating solutions,
For the universe needs a mind to build a world.
Let the child love,
Believing in miracles and trusting in mercy,
Experiencing tears, joy, life and harshness,
For the world is better lived by those who feel.
Let the child grow,
Enjoying the future, reliving past memories,
Letting go of scars that bitter hearts,
For the story is yet achievable if there are steps to follow.
Let the child dream,
Building castles in pleasant places, raising towers made of glass,
Telling the world how a young flower can bloom,
To become a tree of life- birthing branches.
About This Poem
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neopoet
2 months ago
Neopoet AI - version 2.0
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
The poem "Let the Child Dream" beautifully captures the essence of childhood innocence, imagination, and growth. The imagery of stars, crafts, and building a world reflects the limitless possibilities that children envision. The progression from dreaming to loving and then growing adds depth to the narrative of personal development. The metaphor of building castles and raising towers symbolizes the potential for growth and transformation.
One suggestion for improvement could be to further explore the emotions and experiences that shape a child's journey. Adding specific examples or vivid descriptions could enhance the reader's connection to the themes of the poem. Additionally, considering varying the structure or rhythm of the poem could create a more dynamic flow and engage the reader on a deeper level.
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Candlewitch
2 months ago
hello Sheddie,
wonderful poem...the thought of "stars blossoming" is enchanting! I much enjoyed this poem!
always, Cat
Sheddie
1 month 4 weeks ago
Thank you, Candle witch, for
Thank you, Candle witch, for finding the poem pleasing.
I'm honored.