Let your heart flow to me

Good to read yours after a long time. I will come back to read this again at leisure. In the mean time, wish to know if you would prefer to change "spoke lot" to "speaks a lot" to maintain present tense as in other lines of 1st stanza.

Has it taken you nearly three years to write another piece LOL.
Welcome back we always miss our poets, we have quite a few from India now, you should all join up and help each other, then come into the stream and workshops here.
The time difference is very big from India to the States must be 12 hours in some cases.
It is lovely to see so many of you though and I hope we can be here for you all.
Take care out there, yours Ian.T

This is a nice piece.l like it.

alid
I'm inviting you to read my poems too. need a lot of feedbacks to help me improve....

but I like to trim till I get direct to the point but this is not necessarily right.

Here is how I'd rework some of the lines, just an example, you might not like it, so please dicard it all together.

I know you miss my silly talks,
the silence which speaks lot,
the sharing in everything,
every second and every night,

Just thoughts.

I don't know if your remember me I was 'Seren' on the old site

I really liked your poem but there was one glaring thing that stands out for me

I know you miss my silly talks,
the silence which speaks lot, <--- "the silence which speaks [a] lot" or the other alternative "the silence which speaks [lots]."

that's the only thing I can see that needs attention you've done a good job with your edits nice to see you again :)

kindest regards Jayne-Chloe :)

I was about to suggest a change but notice that Jayne has already done that...adding an [a] as proposed by her in L2 S1

Cheers...