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Feb 15, 2023
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Let's Now Not Cling
As we age
across life's each page
let's not now any longer rage
as we are about to leave this worldly stage
where since decades
we remain en caged
now we must pave our way
as newer actors come on stage
to show their rising ways
let's now shy away
as they now openly blissfully
orgasmic-ally engage
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 4 months ago
Changing of the Guard
Is this a poem about gracefully passing the torch to a younger generation?
Tim
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
We all travel through similar times ...many times
very few vary
based on our
genes environment and circumstance
all vary but majorly minuscule..
as a matter of fact just saying
let's now not be the one's thriving on greed
Let's go on the laid out track
for each one some how differently
do you hear me
Geezer
2 years 4 months ago
I only...
want my younger siblings and the people that are my friends and family to have as good a time with reading, writing poetry and stories, as I have. How they do it, I leave up to them. Love ya, lovedly. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
Thank ya
Geezerlyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
Thank you so much Mark
for your inspiration and sweet content Live on we must then merge with the atmosphere as dust ...We all have no choice no voice
its a laid down drill
Seren
2 years 4 months ago
Dear Love
Your poem made me think of this quote...
"One day you will look back and see that all along you were blooming." - Morgan Harper Nichols
It's a wonderful poem. Bravo
Love and biggest hugs Sis xox
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
Yeah thats why u r showing
your blooming pics sis
baby lol
nice quote though
Seren
2 years 4 months ago
Thats my Granddaughter her
Thats my Granddaughter her name is Abby, and I am in so in love with her, you'll see all four of my grandbabies I plan to change my picture more often!!!
love Sis x
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
OH sis
what a treat 'twill be
friendly kids I love too
have 4 brightest kids
the world need to see too
ah hope some day
you will too