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Aug 31, 2022
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Letter To My Angel
Silence has been my bed mate
since you left me in solitude
I'm gradually sinking
into my own mind
your absence has victimized me
I'm alone carrying a load of memories
deep down in my heart
I'm choked in fury
what is true for me right now
I'm at the crossroads
my thoughts and emotions
are now dying slowly
my taste of love
my quest to live in love
is strangled, muted
I'm now unsound
©® Onyinyechi Cosmos Etu
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Comments
RoseBlack
2 years 10 months ago
Grief
Leaves open wounds which bare our souls. You have captivated the loneliness left behind when we lose someone we love and the struggle to move on. Well done.
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Jackweb
2 years 10 months ago
Yeah!
Thanks Rose for stopping by. You nailed it.
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