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Aug 03, 2020
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Life
If i should weep as a weeping willow in
life, yet, a nursing mother's breast would
be gnawed into the bone.
So, gift me a diamond nail, and shatter
every mirror, with a shiny finger, still,
could i simulate a finch beak or bowel?
O! Life, I'm done yanking my sky off your
slimy dusks, flick me yon with your tiny
thumb, even to the land of figs, then chain
my feet to a time-worn plinth, verily,
I would dance with the fire, and the sea.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Dandini
4 years 6 months ago
I found this to have some
I found this to have some most unusual imagery.
Tosin Atoyebi
4 years 1 month ago
What do you mean by the
Thanks for your remark?