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Oct 13, 2022
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Life is a DREAM
Life all by now know
has millions of facets
some love forest walks
others just in bed time talk
many love dogs walk
so many keep cutting grass
let time by pass
most of us love the seasons so flowery
many cherish birds and bees
but poets the likes of me
speak metaphorically
and
leave it to the voyeurs...what to do
life is sheer glory
make it not gory
marry then build your own life story
live in a single one or multiply to higher
that
is left to you
you are the master of thy brazened art
sshhsay stay smart....
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 9 months ago
This
Is my favorite yet. Superb.
I am the master of my brazened heart and you, my lovedly, are extra smart.
Tim
Lavender
2 years 9 months ago
Life is a DREAM
Good morning, Lovedly,
We have many choices throughout our lives, and your poetry has put them in perspective. This poem very much feels like a dream, or maybe a smooth journey down a river. It is light in spirit.
Thank you!
L
lovedly
2 years 9 months ago
LAV AND TIM THANKS
KINDNESS