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Mar 18, 2022
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life moves on and on
The end was inevitable
now we continue
the earth continues
its STABLE
CHANGE IS CHANGEABLE
only
CONSTANT
thanks to all
let the hearts bleed for a while
can't stop
then move on
the world
the earth revolves
we also it's natures law
so abide with me
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ray Whitaker
3 years 3 months ago
You are becoming more organized, in your own way
and this is appealing to me!
i believe you want "it's STABLE" instead of the "its"
lovedly
3 years 3 months ago
Thanks to you all and
all Neopoets who scan and give me great comments
Candlewitch
3 years 3 months ago
dear lovedly,
why don't you comment on other people/poets work? we need your help in that capacity, too!
*hugs, Cat
lovedly
3 years 3 months ago
Cats yes I do
but no one likes my bluntness
and they have no clue
what can lovedly do
Candlewitch
3 years 3 months ago
lovedly...
I, for one, LOVE your truth and bluntness!!!
*hugs, Cat
lovedly
3 years 3 months ago
Cats you I believe
glad you love my
FAILINGS
TRUTH AND BLUNTNESS
all my life I have been treated
like a football
Do you also like to play
many kick around never mind
I can add you as one
this part of my poem
is ONLY fun
madam
Candlewitch
3 years 3 months ago
dear lovedly,
I like the "game" of football, but I don't like being treated like one. I got a lot of that growing up. I am blunt and truthful, too. and I come from a family of female liars.
ever, eddy
*hugs, Cat
p.s.
I like your poems
lovedly
3 years 3 months ago
Cats
you educate me
thanks
Geezer
3 years 3 months ago
Yup...
stability is a much-needed commodity in this crazy world that keeps getting crazier. Nice job, lovey
~ Geez.
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lovedly
3 years 3 months ago
wow Gee
you are on line first time Why haven't you read and commented on my CONTEST POEM COLOURFUL I wonder still
my poetric master thanks in advance+
Geezer
3 years 3 months ago
I'll go look for it...
Don't know how I missed it! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
3 years 3 months ago
Hopefully
Gee I'd love to hear from thee