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LIGHT CANDLES FOR SILENCE AND PEACE

You surely have discerning eyes
A CANDLE OR MANY CANDLES
we lit to commemorate
our pets final eternal move to the unknown moon

all is over
our pet had been blessed by lovely folks
even though his stay was briefer than brief

May FLASHY
now Rest in Peace
eternally beyond eternity

god bless him spiritually
he was more human
than any human could be

wish you could have him seen
an angel was
FLASHY

About This Poem

Last Few Words: REST IN PEACE NOW ETERNALLY

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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lovedly

lovedly

4 years 8 months ago

THANK YOU Gee

It has been a great personal loss for me
lonely as I be
now he rests in
PEACE

lovedly

lovedly

4 years 8 months ago

thank you Lav

everyone's life is
good bad or sad

the finale is
you light candles today

some one will for you
some day
if love is your
lively way
thanks for coming
our way