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Jul 26, 2011
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linger here
trace me into yourself
before your throbbing
subsides
let the skin of our skin
not separate with its
consuming desire
and
we will have turned to ash
but enter me with a handbook
of poems, take me like a
conquered land, just leave
me with enough sighs
to bask on the island
that separates
us for all eternity,
linger here, my love.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Forgive me my indulgence today, I had to balance out my rant with a rave. ;-) ~A
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Timbo
13 years 12 months ago
excellent, really like this
excellent, really like this poem and that's all I can ask for!
Tim
raj
13 years 12 months ago
Anna
just one word to sum up my comment "tantalizing"...