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loved
loved
Apr 12, 2013 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

lips kiss in shadows

without any sensations
Oh man
what would be that kiss,
loveless,
two shadows like ghosts will meet
and you say twill be a kiss
doesn't match my lips,

let me tell you
I love to kiss....
any miss
any sis
any mom,
and my kiss perhaps some day
you may want too...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Josephus

Josephus

12 years 3 months ago

Interesting...

What would a kiss be without passion! A mere touching of lips has no taste let alone sensation.

loved

loved

12 years 3 months ago

my passions went down the cliffs

decades ago
now my passion lies
in what you say to me
lovely sailor
my passions went down the cliffs
some day
another sail
another heaven way
far from today
in the skies beyond eternity
we may sail together
once again
alas now
tis in vain

S

scribbler

12 years 3 months ago

Hi Loved

Good description of a Vulcan's kiss lol......................stan

loved

loved

12 years 3 months ago

wow you came

your silence was annoying
people our age ought to know
just a brush of lips
is worth it

E

eightmenout

12 years 3 months ago

Alas

The brush of lips
is only worth it
if the paint is fluid
and leaves
a perfect picture

Seren

Seren

12 years 3 months ago

Loved

Hmmmm that fleeting kiss the touch without taste
but as Joe said what is a kiss without passion ?

I never want to know lol ;)

love JC x

loved

loved

12 years 3 months ago

what is passion

at times the passion is felt more
within than without
the physical passion you talk of
no doubt is momemtary
but a passion of remembrance
is long term memory
we all love both
you as well as me
but what of a passion we speak
is simple on Neopoet poetry

a passion indeed
with all our love
for this breed

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 3 months ago

Loved

It is so easy to hold a hand or touch the lips with yours, yet how often does the Soul join in where it sends out that message that only touching Souls can give, no matter who is who,
Yours Ian.T
PS:- your first part was OK then you told us of things without feeling, then that became as nothing...