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May 30, 2020
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Little Girl
Little girl
Little girl
Don’t you cry
I know it’s hard
It’s hard to fight
Little girl
Little girl
Your not alone
We’re here to stay
We’re here for you
Little girl
Little girl
God is with you
God will keep you alive and safe
Little girl
Little girl
You will be ok
Little girl
Little girl
Your the strongest we know
Little girl
Little girl
We all love you
Please don’t lose this fight
We can’t live without you
About This Poem
Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
5 years 4 months ago
Seems like written
for someone with cancer or some kind of fatal disease.
I think she will appreciate your tender poem.