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Jul 02, 2016
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Live and Let Die
So many against one another.
Watching souls plunge; freedom suffers
From liberty, money, power
Respecting only society's hour.
Live and let die......
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Esker
9 years ago
Right to Bear arms!
freedom and libertines!
many feel it..
many do it
from clubs and implements
caves to caverns
watchtowers to radar
We have come a long
way...to the end
of peace!
sad but true
reaping the ruin
thank U!