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Feb 22, 2025
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Live the Day!
Yesterday's a verse,
You can't reverse to.
Today's a poem,
A delightful hymn.
Tomorrow's a song,
To those who belong.
So live each, live them all.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
4 months ago
Live the Day!
Hello, Rula,
A brief poem, but so much needed wisdom and positive energy, especially now. What unique structure and form.
Thank you!
Lxxx
(I wonder if "hem" is actually "hymn" ? I'll be back!)
Rula
4 months ago
Dearest Lavender
Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
This one in fact wrote itself in no time.just the way I like my poetry to flow.
That hem was absolutely a stupid mistake,so I much appreciate the heads up
Thank you so much dearest friend!