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Dec 20, 2020
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Look into my Eyes..
They have given me time
till Jan 11 2021
then they say
they will look into my eyes
like it or nay
yellow eyes
today
i said don't worry
will use red dye
before you kill me guy
11 JAN
you say
to look into my eyes
even today
young ones die
lol
boy
Don't happiness destroy...
About This Poem
Last Few Words: If you have no humor in life is it then worth living...
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
4 years 6 months ago
stream is now cold
all has iced
where to go
the poems now don't naturally flow
from here
lovedly
will also go
unless it does lesser snow
and neopoets stream as ever does flow
here we go