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The Loss of Another

Winter bares its naked trees
tracing my eyes
with a blizzard wonderland
as I seek to find
an end to the strife
playing hide and seek with ghosts
that never try to find me
burgeoning an anger,
a sorrow,
that pushes against my skin
like a polyester suit
tailored twenty pounds too tight.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allen Poe, Henry Rollins, Langston Hughes, Emily Dickinson

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Comments

wesley snow

wesley snow

10 years 5 months ago

Good language use.

I don't however, quite understand the title. In the poem I can see no reference to "the loss of another". I may have missed it.

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eightmenout

10 years 5 months ago

Sir

The loss is described in winter baring it's naked

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