Rula

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Lost and Found

I lost 'me' where the foliage had to stream,
in worn out memories, and cold dreams,
on the cliffs and the gulfs of time
where willows weep with no rhyme.
Then I found 'me' - bashing
through the bright ember
of September,
A phoenix grew_
I found
You

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Please check the form of the reversed Etheree..Give it a try, I am sure you will be satisfied.

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Comments

Candlewitch

2 years 5 months ago

dear Rula,

very interesting...how did you hear about this form of poetry?

*hugs, Cat

Rula

2 years 5 months ago

Dearest cat

Here find all forms of poetry.
Please enjoy
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/index.html

Candlewitch

2 years 5 months ago

thank you!

I will be checking into it!

*hugs, Cat

Jackweb

2 years 5 months ago

A very

Interesting form. It gives beauty to the art.
.

Rula

2 years 4 months ago

Thank you

Jack. Appreciate it!

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 5 months ago

I love it

I wanna play with one line.

where willows whine* (weep) or (wail) with no rhyme.

Just a suggestion. Keeps the alliterative aspect. In the States we call them “weeping willows”

Tim

Rula

2 years 4 months ago

Tim

V. Much appreciate your suggestion.
Done
Thank you so much.

Lavender

2 years 5 months ago

Lost and Found

Hello, Rula!
This is fun, especially with such wonderful rhyme! I love the beautiful theme and its perfect title. I always look forward to your wisdom and knowledge of structured poetry.
Thank you! xx
L