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Nov 29, 2012
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Love
Oh, love
I know not how
The Heaven’s above
Breathe that vow
In which all life,
Sings without care
Sweetness in the
Palpitating air
When shall it rain
Down from the skies
To relieve the yearning
Of my deepest cries?
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
sueb
12 years 7 months ago
I enjoyed this thanks x
I enjoyed this thanks x
Shamoneness
12 years 7 months ago
Thank
you! c:
docmaverick
12 years 7 months ago
No "pun" intended....
...but, quite simply a lovely piece. it could...with work, transfer well & easily to an Ode.
It also read nicely, aloud.
Sincerely,
doc.
Shamoneness
12 years 7 months ago
Thank
you very much! (: