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Nov 10, 2017
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Love
I love you like a butterfly;
my stomach flutters,
only for you.
I love you like a diamond,
sparkling and glittering,
when I look into your eyes.
I love you like raindrops,
that embraces the leaves with tears,
when we're apart.
I love you like a lighthouse,
with its guiding light,
always there, forever beckoning.
I love you like a mystery,
which I can sense,
but not explain.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Eumolpus
7 years 7 months ago
this is a lovely poem
A "list poem" , a very effective form. Some very nice fresh images, such as
I love you like raindrops,
that embraces the leaves with tears,
when we're apart.
You have a nice touch. Take yourself seriously. "Aliens" as favorite poets...
Geezer
7 years 7 months ago
I like...
the list too! I particularly like the "I love you like a butterfly;
my stomach flutters for only you". I have had those feelings myself and can relate to them.
Nice work, ~ Geezer.
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