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Aug 15, 2024
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Love
The feeling,
the sheer,
the utter,
.....catastrophe of love
New love
Mature love
Old love
There is an ache
To caging all this hope
In your soul
You whisper promises to
Your higher Power
You promise
To behave
You promise
You will never take
Love for granted
You whisper spells
During the witching hour
You look at the amber moon
And wade in hope
For new, present and lost
Love
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
neopoet
10 months 3 weeks ago
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
Your poem "Love" captures the different stages and complexities of love through vivid imagery and emotions. The repetition of "love" at the beginning of each stanza emphasizes its significance and evolution over time. The references to promises, spells, and the amber moon add depth to the theme of love as a powerful force that can both uplift and burden the soul. Consider exploring more specific details or experiences to further engage the reader and create a stronger connection to the theme. Additionally, refining the structure and flow of the poem could enhance its impact and coherence.
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Candlewitch
9 months 2 weeks ago
I adore this poem...
my favorite lines are:
You whisper spells
During the witching hour
You look at the amber moon
And wade in hope
For new, present and lost
Love
*hugs, Cat
kowque
9 months 1 week ago
I'm those mad people
That LOVE love,
I love it for everyone.
It's beautiful to be a part of, in any form.
Thank you for your touching comment.
Leslie
9 months 2 weeks ago
Wow! You have really outdone
Wow! You have really outdone yourself. That is an awesome poem. You are becoming more and more engaged with your feelings. Did it release pent up emotion?
kowque
9 months 1 week ago
Thank you
Excuse my late response to your email.
My toddler is teething and had decided we must all be her slaves.
Thank you for stopping by!
:)