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lovedly
lovedly
Sep 12, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

LOVE ME AS A ROSE

Roses fade
yes...
but they never die...

they live in books
till end of time

recalling those moments
since lapsed,
instantly
love roses only

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Lavender

Lavender

2 years 10 months ago

Hi, Lovedly,

Yes! We all have a few rose petals planted in old books, reminding us of those we love. Something completely romantic. Lovely poem.
L

S

scribbler

2 years 10 months ago

hi loved

Line 6 try something like"recalling those moments" For some reason just sounds more poetic to me.......