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Feb 17, 2013
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love me will ye
love me will ye
love me like you've loved none other
mother pop sibling,
yes brother sister,
uncle aunts don't figure in today
the world is full of anxiety
if i may that say…
no nephew, niece has any time for you
even if love you gave them too…
so love me today
like you do love your Lord
be he, human
angel or God….
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Frenchf
12 years 4 months ago
Hopefully
They will do so after your write
loved
12 years 4 months ago
did you mean
demise f
BlueDemon77
12 years 4 months ago
You never know
But the poetry is In the gnawing place and would likely force its way from you anyway. I care what people, especially those I respect think of my work. I don't know if it ever goes away. Write not to be loved, love to write and you will find your goal: I've seen you do it before.
Ron
loved
12 years 4 months ago
thank you
actually i read so many
about 700 friends across the inty
they compose one or two ..then vanish
and i reply poetically
off the cuff ...
its for them more my heart cries
not as much as for myself
hope I do clarify..