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Sep 20, 2022
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LOVE NIAGARA HAVE VIAGRA
Need to take a sabbatical
let oldies take a back seat
now the newer generation
after the swans have flown
take over the scene
Sun does set over all human fields
glory be now shared amongst newer breeds
let's them now feel
grass is still green
ere NIAGARA snows
prepare a white shield
relax if you need
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ray Whitaker
2 years 6 months ago
Little blue pill, I think
Do yiu remember the Rolling Stones song, “Mother’s Little Helper from the 60’s? Yiu piece reminds me of that…
lovedly
2 years 6 months ago
thanks
many may need the blue PILLS