Love is Your Love...From My Archive 2015

Love is your love.
all is love
even when one is harsh
love is meant to convey happiness
all its lovely way

but when one repeats
love, love and love
again and again
it places on one’s mind
a damn strain

does he love me
but in vain
none the less
love comes in
let it flow
from without to within

love is he who is lovely
loved by the sweet bard
smiled he

can you still, love this egoistic
self seeking one
some may call a whiner
what the fx
wants this loved one
only love
like an eight year old
damsel
with legs above
as says his voice
now you may rejoice.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Triskelion

3 years 6 months ago

Love is King

So few understand that. Some days, I feel the same. Perhaps when I become as matured as you, I will understand also. The world is changing, but just more hectic. Your writing is a place to put all back in perspective and reeeee-lax!!!

Thomas

lovedly

3 years 6 months ago

This world is not now a- changing

it has been since evolution was accepted
many still are adamant
can't diffuse
narcissism
they still shed tears on what passed ones had said
they fail to apply their own minds
and best fail to admit
they have none
I have seen human for passed 8 decades
plus minus

Triskelion

3 years 6 months ago

My friend

needs love more than a narcissist. Admit it. Love is King. The fall is made of the winds of time and the dried leaves pelt your back like the whip of an inward society. The fire is all around.

Thomas

lovedly

3 years 6 months ago

please speak in plain CDN English

your words have greater meanings I need to devour friend

Geezer

3 years 6 months ago

Eat them up...

Love is to be devoured like a like a three-course meal. First, the appetizer, then the main course, and finally dessert! You, my friend, have a smorgasbord or buffet every day! ~ Geez.
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lovedly

3 years 6 months ago

YOU GEE

Sure can see through the GALAXY
Ah it makes me feel happy
Dessert share please
dates fro the only oasis