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Feb 27, 2019
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LOVELY CEMENTED FORESTS
Forests of cement
if there is any beauty
between
Cement and Forest
and
any Love between
man and woman
'tis here
on mommy
Earth
let all the waters
not wash it away
Love is very dear
very costly
here
part of mother
Earth
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
6 years 4 months ago
I like
the 'cement forest' expression, but I couldn't find its connection to love
lovedly
6 years 4 months ago
@80
sets in senility
so grant it
Rula
Cloudthings
6 years 4 months ago
Very much enjoyed this little perspective
For me it felt like a seeking of goodness (love) in what we have before us, be it natural or even hideous concrete. I really enjoyed it, in simple warm & amicable poetry. Lovely.
lovedly
6 years 4 months ago
such sweet comments maiden
you put life into my ''cement'' thanks
above the clouds