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May 21, 2020
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Lovely Dale
A very beautiful vision
in the distant horizon
I see
as you are narrating your
love engraved poetry
neither the stars will be thee
nor will I be
as a shining
Moon
yet our true love
throughout the wilderness
will stare
where will you be
I, where
yet the moon
in you
and
sun
in me
will always be
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
tyro
5 years 1 month ago
A very beautiful poem about a
A very beautiful poem about a merging into one.
lovedly
5 years 1 month ago
Thank you so muchly
tyro