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Oct 21, 2011
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Lovely Dreams
Love and dreams,
are two banks of a river
neither can meet the other
and
Eventually we must veer
to meet each other,
across all waters and barriers
and
then you will know,
i do,
What you do
too.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Timbo
13 years 8 months ago
kinda like this one. Well
kinda like this one. Well done!
Tim
loved
13 years 8 months ago
Glad You came by after a long while
and
hope you shall continue
to appreciate Loved's style
thanks