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lovedly
lovedly
Apr 08, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A LOVER SENT ME A NOTE

......and the taste of you
through oranges
I'd thought of
apples or mangoes

but anything juicy
when in love goes
first testing dose

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

3 years 3 months ago

I not...

quite sure where this story goes. I feel like there is something missing. ~ Geez.
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Geezer

Geezer

3 years 3 months ago

yes...

It might help.
` Geez.
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