[Love/Trust] Runic Symbols

T r u s t is the short cut to L o v e

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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

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Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

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Comments

raj

6 years 11 months ago

Hi friend Rula

nice comparison of the two words love and trust you have made in this one liner...giving an underlying message that both compliment each other

do you think route would be a good replacement for cut?

I have a few alternatives

t r u s t is a stepping stone to l o v e

t r u s t opens the door to l o v e

t r u s t a doorway to l o v e
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Rula

6 years 11 months ago

Mmmmm

All are good suggestions/alternatives raj, but I thought the use of "short cut" is a fresher use of the words, don't know if you agree with me

raj

6 years 11 months ago

I do agree Rula but what is causing me a kind of a bump is the word "cut"... i don't know if you agree but i believe that though trust is important for it to blossom into love it needs to survive the test of time so i believe it can be a means [route] and not an end in itself....to me short cut equates with haste...know what i mean?
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Rula

6 years 11 months ago

Hello raj

I see now what you mean. I think you need to read the "short cut" as a phrase to give the meaning that you suggested earlier which is "route". It has a totally different view than reading "short" alone and "cut" alone.
Got me now?

raj

6 years 11 months ago

Noted Rula

Noted Rula
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Rula

6 years 11 months ago

Hello Bb

hope you read more about the form. It's a great fun especially when you're limited with time.
Appreciate your thoughts and the comment.

Rula

6 years 11 months ago

BINGO JRS

Thank you for sparing me the time to explain. You are spot on dear in reading this mini liner :)