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Mar 06, 2012
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Lucky Stars
I thank my lucky stars
and
bless you for your good wishes .
When the time comes
let nature take its recourse
and
let's go back to the creator ,
without remorse .
Then let the docs gape
and faces may they make
what a fool,
didn't let them their dollars make .
but why delay
and
bear the pain
one day that final day
will come again
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
wesley snow
13 years 4 months ago
This is a sequel...
... right? Neither of these poems are "riddles" as you call them. I think they are quite straight forward and amusing with a sense of reality. wesley
loved
13 years 4 months ago
your a gem
a real diamondic gem