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Apr 21, 2016
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A LUZ --Portuguese -English
A LUZ
A luz que brilha dentro
é como uma chama de vela
tremulando ao vento,
uma vacilação da alma
em antecipação assustadora
abatido pelo Tempo
enfraquecido até morrer...
THE LIGHT
the light that shines within
is like a candle flame that
flickers in the wind
a soul wavering
in frightful anticipation
weathered by Time
and dying…
About This Poem
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Comments
Rula
9 years 2 months ago
What can I say Joe
This is poetry! True poetry!Simple yet reflects true raw feelings
Who writes alike shall never die
Geremia
9 years 2 months ago
What a great compliment, Rula
What a great compliment, Rula
joe
lovedly
9 years 2 months ago
and yes this is also
THE BIRD FLIES
WHERE IS HOME!
Geremia
9 years 2 months ago
muito obrigado,,amigo meu.
muito obrigado,,amigo meu.
Geezer
9 years 2 months ago
I have images...
of a candle popping and sputtering against the wind and the light that's shed showing the true human spirit. ~ Gee.
Geremia
9 years 2 months ago
yes, that is what the light
yes, that is what the light is...
joe