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Esker
Esker
Aug 31, 2012 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

M-79..

There is crickets over at the tree line
They are keeping me awake
the dreams away

lock and load
and wait for the silence..

Jiminy cricket can book it out of there!!!

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 10 months ago

Steve

There are, There is, crickets over there, well you must take care, which way round is the M-79 or you'll sure get Shrapnel in your behind..
Loved the write, but a bit of excessive force being used.
Grenades and cricket don't mix.
A bat and ball and three silly sticks,
Not that sort of cricket ????Yours Ian.T