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Jun 11, 2016
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M E L T E D P A I N E D
crux of lips..a crushed pressed purgatory rouge
and teeth slight agape as white as pearled marble wrists
in the story
of revenge and Love
the queen in waiting
heart of a Dove
Hatred simmers
while the brands wait
and a shadowed state
these affairs
of transpire
drip sweat
the tension climaxed
headinesss
swelling of inscence
born innocence
Noxious blooms
wilted
in abbatoire beauty
the voices call
down chimney
stacks
and whisper
whiskey breath
visions
as sculpted
as horse skulls
and basins
blessed
receiving
velvet chaise
lounge
stretch
cross ankle
supplicant
a madness
twists round
as fresh as
a serpents
quizzical
grip
....
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Seren
7 years 9 months ago
Wow !!!
This is gold Steven. Nothing to critique it works for me, amazing write cannot believe it's remained undiscovered
Love J xxx