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Apr 07, 2013
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M0RNING WAYS
MORNING WAYS
When shadows gray
and blue melancholy
cross my brow
as morning strikes
and I awake
I wonder how
many ways
I can break
this evil spell
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
12 years 3 months ago
Joe
A piece of awe,.
That you wake is a blessing, it means that you still have much to do, just ask what the tasks are, but maybe you already know the things you have to do..
A Good write glad that you awoke to a new day, Yours Ian.T
Bonitaj
12 years 3 months ago
Hello Geremia!
another 'soulful' write from you. You always capture the mood so well!
Regards
Geremia
12 years 3 months ago
Thanks for that ,my friend.
Thanks for that ,my friend.
joe
loved
12 years 3 months ago
yeah and tomorrow,,when we are no more
yesterday
i composed a wonderful poetry
on tomorrow will come
but sad to say
you may or may not stay etc
i forgot to save it
they rushed me mad
i'd forgotten the title even
now you remind me
i shall recompose
twill come back to me
thanks Gerie
Geremia
12 years 3 months ago
:)
:)
loved
12 years 3 months ago
just composed
and posted
do see
weirdelf
12 years 3 months ago
Elegant, succinct and meaningful
A perfect piece of verse, not a word of excess or out of place. In just nine lines and twenty six words you present feeling with imagery, dilemma and hope. Quite extraordinary.
Geremia
12 years 3 months ago
I am pleased and encouraged.
I am pleased and encouraged. Thank you, Jess.