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Oct 30, 2022
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This poem is part of the contest:
Neopoem Of The Week Contest October 30th to November 5th 2022
Maggiore
MAGGIORE
The lake is long, from South to North
Magnificent mountains rise on each side
White misty clouds hover along the peaks
But to all here, it is the water that speaks
Neutrality will always be the chosen bride
And pride in a future, when going forth
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 8 months ago
I love the structure
Great job. I believe you use that technique in others I’ve read and it always surprises a little. Excellent language use. Excellent theme. Great ending!
Tim
Rula
2 years 8 months ago
A lively piece
gifted to our mother nature.
Especially like the internal rhymes and the last two lines speak volumes to me.
Rula
2 years 8 months ago
A lively piece
gifted to our mother nature.
Especially like the internal rhymes and the last two lines speak volumes to me.
Thank you for sharing.