Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Feb 07, 2013
⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
Magic
Waves cascade against the shore
relaxation to my very core
always leaves me wanting more
the sea to me, is never a bore
Whispers from sea shells
Wafting by, sea smells
casting a magic spell
my heart and soul swell
Sitting here is just bliss
enjoying sea air's sweet kiss
not a moment I want to miss
Feels like paradise, this
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
sueb
12 years 5 months ago
thanks a million ephraim for
thanks a million ephraim for reading and commenting Sueb x
Seren
12 years 5 months ago
hey Sue
I agree with Eph with a little pruning this will run true ..
nice to read you again
Hugs Jc x
sueb
12 years 5 months ago
thanks Jc hugs back x
thanks Jc
hugs back x