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Feb 09, 2013
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Mama
.
Once,
so long ago now, it seems;
Every thing touched
& everywhere
that I turned,
her scent permeated
both air & skin.
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: Childhood smells are almost always garlanded by the personal scent of one's primary care giver.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Frenchf
12 years 5 months ago
Yes the brain is a potent force
Able to bring up nausea or pleasant dreams and images from just a smell
Frederick Kesner
12 years 5 months ago
quite so!
A rather clinical approach, but valid nonetheless. Thank you for sharing your kind estimation. Have a pleasant week. Cheers.