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Jul 28, 2020
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Man What Hun
Men are not poor
they're very intelligent
as in silence well bow
get for whatever little
they endow
ladies also know
the best way to maintain
love solace harmony
let him say
'I am the man
of the house
I have a clear cut
submission
my darlingest one
they all accept this admission’
Ooooo Ah,
I'm the
real man
of my house
I undoubtedly
enjoy her permission
to spell out
sprawl like a lion
be broad like a horse
of course
she lets me say so
wow
smiles behind my back
we all know
married aren’t you
fifty 55 years
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
4 years 11 months ago
Man What Hun
Hi, Lovedly,
Methinks I understand your poem - and I'm grinning. The sage and wisdom of couples, especially after 55 years (Are you speaking of yourself? Congratulations!) seems to be that the wife LETS the husband think he's the man of the house - as she smiles behind his back.
Thank you!
L
lovedly
4 years 11 months ago
ha ha ha lol
applies to all and any couple
perhaps you have morely time ahead
then remember
what I'd said
let your man feel
he is of a Classic Brand
like no other hand