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Mango Guy
Yours is good story
about wine and liquor
today I saw a fruit seller
boy
legs long and thin
no hips
I asked him what happened
he said
Corona was around
so he thought
why waste so much alcohol
and
his hips went aground
there was no sound
He just enjoyed the kick
the virus cherished
left little else
for any one to eat
what
his meat
The kid could have perished
but
he did the sanitizer relish
Low
he smiled
had nothing else to show
but about his hidden face
I enjoyed the glow
what a facial blow
his mask did not much allow
I can that avow
About This Poem
Last Few Words: and this is the future of VIRACIAL PRICE
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
5 years 1 month ago
this guy
purchased mangoes from an orchard
and
was selling on the highway
loaded on his trolley
and
the sanitizer guy
had 60 percent alcohol in the sanitizer what
to kill one percent
or one single Virus
'o what a mismatch
lady 15
can you catch?????
lol
thanks nice fun
I escaped the high temp
became a heat stroke
Now I am cold
a bit bold
though old
lovedly
5 years 1 month ago
thanks Teddy 15
last night I dreamed
an even more funny poem
If I recall all... I shall compose a fresh one
for your suggestions
but you must win
and /or others at least at mine grin...
Rula
5 years 1 month ago
Lol
today I saw a fruit seller
boy
legs long and thin
no hips
This is my son, but even before the Corona thing.
lovedly
5 years 1 month ago
ha ha ha lol
nicey