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Sep 28, 2012
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THE MARK OFCAIN
THE MARK OF CAIN
You are darkness
the serpent’s kiss
the voice that lies
and the look that shames.
You are hell’s enchantment
and you kill the light
in me.
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Ian.T
12 years 9 months ago
Joe
The faces of Cain, just a thought process with trigger words, just mention Cain to most people they will give you an example in their lives.
Good write there young man, Yours Ian.T
Geremia
12 years 9 months ago
Humans--somewhere between
Humans--somewhere between animal and angel' I guess.