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Feb 24, 2023
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Marriage
She was for me,love
Forever placed within my heart
She was for me strength
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
2 years 4 months ago
Hello, Clentin,
What a gracious haiku. You both are very fortunate. Is this poem created to mark an anniversary, perhaps?
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Clentin
2 years 4 months ago
55 years
55 years
Clentin
2 years 4 months ago
55 years
55 years
Lavender
2 years 4 months ago
Congratulations!
The feeling is well captured in your poem.
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Seren
2 years 4 months ago
Dear Clentin
This is just Brilliant, you've written such a beautiful tribute to your love, congratulations on 55yrs that is an amazing achievement in this day and age.
Here is to many more. <3
hugs Jayne x
Clentin
2 years 4 months ago
Thank you. I will be reading
Thank you. I will be reading your poetry. I am trying to read as much as I can if the contributors.