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Aug 07, 2018
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Marriage [Runic Symbol: Gebo]
Marriage is like union of wick and wax, illuminating with light of love, weathering the storms
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: For information on Runic Symbols you may visit https://www.instructables.com/id/How-To-Read-Runes/
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
6 years 11 months ago
Dear Raj
this is a fabulous liner about marriage. The wick, wax simile works perfectly well.
The "illuminating with light of love, weathering the storms" Wow! Can't be better expressed!!
Congrats!
raj
6 years 11 months ago
Thanks Rula
for reading and your good words.
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