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Jul 06, 2015
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MASK
Day's pass nothing lasts
what’s tomorrow but another
task, too distracted to stop to
ask who are we behind the mask.
What is truth when honesty does not
suit the unspoken mind can be
nasty and unkind, we forge forward
without reason to rewind.
Who we are may have been left
behind, is it the middle ground
where you can be found or are you
a beacon emitting echoes of
scandalous transgressions.
Refusing to be a vessel of mediocrity
a nameless face in the gathering crowd.
I stand forthright
angry and proud.
— ziggy, Jul 06, 2015
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Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Draft
Critiques
weirdelf
10 years 11 months ago
I don't know you age but this is a teen-angst poem
Says nothing new.
Try again.
lovedly
10 years 11 months ago
u returned ??????
see what Jess says
he is the master
u banned me
remember
weirdelf
10 years 11 months ago
I don't have the authority to ban you
nor would I if I could. You are a pathetic attention seeker but sometimes write quite wonderful poetry.
lovedly
10 years 11 months ago
no Jess ...not you
but this poet
who has returned
after along sabbatical
asked me to stay away from him
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