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Mar 15, 2012
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MEDUSA THE SCENT OF MALE
MEDUSA : THE SCENT OF MALE
From the darkness
that hid
her abomination
she slid
sniffed the air
and dropped her veil
seduced by the smell
of male
there they stood
mesmerized by the beauty
of her ugliness
in a trance
of desire and revulsion
as Medusa began
her dance
of seduction
serpent strides
back and forth
left to right
in orgasmic thrusts
of promises
that were to come
to each one
who looked upon
her serpent smile
there they stood
stone they had become
paralyzed by desire
and revulsion
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Barbara Writes
13 years 3 months ago
i like this
It reads really well
Beauty in her ugliness kind of threw me as her ugliness kills on the spot lol
I like the part in the title "the scent of a male "
Absolutely can seduce a woman lol.
Enioyed reading
Ps the one thing I'm not sure of is who became stone Medusa and the male or the ones looking at her serpent smile:)
Geremia
13 years 3 months ago
Legend is anyone that looked
Legend is anyone that looked upon her turned to stone.
loved
13 years 3 months ago
That's why they say the penis in male is
That's why they say the penis in male is
the Serpent
and the
Forbidden fruit contained as seeds
in the two plums
to be squeezed
and the scent of sperms
all women by now know
that's why women feel attracted to men,
who in the earlier part of the day went solo.
Your serpentine words speak loud enough
for any woman
how so ever ugly,
to yearn...
serpent strides
back and forth
left to right
in orgasmic thrusts
of promises
those were to come
to each one
who looked upon
her serpent smile
Simply exotic words...
Geremia
13 years 3 months ago
Yes. That symbolism was
Yes. That symbolism was recurrent in many Greek myths.
loved
13 years 3 months ago
But,it's my own minds eye
that imagines scientifically so
Barbara Writes
13 years 3 months ago
wow
Never studied Medusa lol she
was a cartoon back in day
so I only new to look ar her would turn you to stone
Barbara Writes
13 years 3 months ago
greek myth
I did new lt was Greek myth like many of the others but i have limited knowledge lol. Guess i should have read more back then.
Geremia
13 years 3 months ago
It was somethiing had to
It was somethiing had to know when I taught Many paperbacks. They were the Greek "freudian" psychology