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Melody of the Sea
A mermaid by the ocean
her accompaniment the tide,
sings to every sailor
a song shared deep inside.
True sea lovers will hear her
as she serenades the moon,
finding a lonely comfort
as she sings her haunting tune.
At times the sea feels angry
raising doubts and causing fear,
but the magic of her melody
falls on every sailors ear;
warning them of danger
from the sea or other boats,
leading them to safety
as she hits her piercing notes.
Her song is now a part of them
which they never can ignore,
and this mermaid keeps on singing
'till they're finally led to shore.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction: How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Roscoe Lane
12 years 9 months ago
Love it,
Love it, it just trips off the tongue, great poem. Regards Roscoe...